写作---感谢信.ppt
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Letter writing
假设你的加拿大笔友peter听说近来山东大旱，来信向你表示慰问。请回信表示感谢，内容包含以下：
1.对关心表示感谢.
2.描述本地干旱现状, 分析其原因.
3.倡议携手保护大自然，防止类似极端天气的频繁发生。
要求：
1．词数120—150.
2．可适当增加细节.
A thank-you letter
Thank you (very much) for ...
It’s (very) kind of you to …
I’m grateful to you for …
I’m writing to express my thanks to you for… and tell you something about…
structures of expressing thanks
书信正文篇章结构：
正文内容结构：
信头
→对关心表示感谢
→描述干旱现状, 分析原因
→倡议携手保护大自然
→落款
首段
主体段
结尾段
←表明意图
←陈述事由
←提出愿望、希望或总结
相关词汇：
drought, disaster, rain, snow, rainfall(降雨), snowfall(降雪), dry, extreme climates, weather,
terrible, serious,
hit, destroy, ruin, damage
拓展：earthquake, fire, flood, hurricane, volcano, typhoon,
glance / average/ tend to / come about/ take measures/ call on sb. to do/ prevent
Try to use some of these words and phrases
2010年9月23日以来，山东省平均降水量16.9毫米，较常年偏少90.2%，是1951年以来同期最少值。
山东省防汛抗旱指挥部办公室主任杨振东说，山东相继有69万人、30万头大牲畜出现临时性饮水困难。有2900多万亩冬小麦受旱，约占全省小麦播种面积的53%，其中重旱483万亩。有366条河道断流、391座水库干涸，干涸的池塘布满龟裂缝隙 。 如果到3月底仍无大范围有效降雨，山东旱情将进一步加剧 。
Requirements for good writings
①整洁卷面 ②蠢错不犯
③句式多变 ④要点不漏
⑤亮点若干 ⑥巧妙串联
⑦语意连贯 ⑧层次不乱
Dear Peter:
I’m writing to express my deep appreciation for your kind sympathies.
In 2010，a serious drought hit Shandong Province and it was 60 years since people had experienced such a terrible one．The dry weather surely damaged the agriculture. Just a glance at the fields, you can get a clear idea about how great the influence of drought on crops is. What’s worse, it is predicted that the drought condition tends to become more serious.
How does it come about that extreme climates such as flood and drought have been happening so often? In my opinion, it is climate changes caused by humans’ unwise activities that increase the frequency of natural disasters like floods and droughts.
I think
假设你的加拿大笔友peter听说近来山东大旱，来信向你表示慰问。请回信表示感谢，内容包含以下：
1.对关心表示感谢.
2.描述本地干旱现状, 分析其原因.
3.倡议携手保护大自然，防止类似极端天气的频繁发生。
要求：
1．词数120—150.
2．可适当增加细节.
A thank-you letter
Thank you (very much) for ...
It’s (very) kind of you to …
I’m grateful to you for …
I’m writing to express my thanks to you for… and tell you something about…
structures of expressing thanks
书信正文篇章结构：
正文内容结构：
信头
→对关心表示感谢
→描述干旱现状, 分析原因
→倡议携手保护大自然
→落款
首段
主体段
结尾段
←表明意图
←陈述事由
←提出愿望、希望或总结
相关词汇：
drought, disaster, rain, snow, rainfall(降雨), snowfall(降雪), dry, extreme climates, weather,
terrible, serious,
hit, destroy, ruin, damage
拓展：earthquake, fire, flood, hurricane, volcano, typhoon,
glance / average/ tend to / come about/ take measures/ call on sb. to do/ prevent
Try to use some of these words and phrases
2010年9月23日以来，山东省平均降水量16.9毫米，较常年偏少90.2%，是1951年以来同期最少值。
山东省防汛抗旱指挥部办公室主任杨振东说，山东相继有69万人、30万头大牲畜出现临时性饮水困难。有2900多万亩冬小麦受旱，约占全省小麦播种面积的53%，其中重旱483万亩。有366条河道断流、391座水库干涸，干涸的池塘布满龟裂缝隙 。 如果到3月底仍无大范围有效降雨，山东旱情将进一步加剧 。
Requirements for good writings
①整洁卷面 ②蠢错不犯
③句式多变 ④要点不漏
⑤亮点若干 ⑥巧妙串联
⑦语意连贯 ⑧层次不乱
Dear Peter:
I’m writing to express my deep appreciation for your kind sympathies.
In 2010，a serious drought hit Shandong Province and it was 60 years since people had experienced such a terrible one．The dry weather surely damaged the agriculture. Just a glance at the fields, you can get a clear idea about how great the influence of drought on crops is. What’s worse, it is predicted that the drought condition tends to become more serious.
How does it come about that extreme climates such as flood and drought have been happening so often? In my opinion, it is climate changes caused by humans’ unwise activities that increase the frequency of natural disasters like floods and droughts.
I think
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